photo by s.calvert.dpchallenge.com
a pile of papers
on a messed up desk
a computer screen
flashing
flashing
white
light
a cup of coffee
spilled
some breadcrumbs
littered
a fan
electric
whirring
turning around
but the room
remains
damp
eerie
a certificate
hangs
on the wall
a reminder
of medals
and honors
achieved
a ballpoint pen
ink
oozing
on paper
notes
scribbled
trashed
on a bin
adjacent to
an unmade bed
where a girl
lay
dead
while clutching
a card
with
a grade
just a
point
short
of being
the best
7 comments:
this is actually quite amazing!!!! you may most definitely use some of my pictures...be my guest :) thanks for stopping by and leaving such a great comment!
@lucy/shutter mama: yipee. thanks for allowing me to use your pics. would tell you as soon as i do a poem for one of those magnificent shots you've got. cheers!
I love poetry especially if I find the thoughts to be enticing and if it's well written.
It's amazing how strong they are. It is a very nice post and I have enjoyed your blog every time that I stopped by.
@doubler and lionel: thanks for stopping by. :)
love visiting your blogs too.
elegant poem....the tone helps me to remember my feelings a few years ago in school :/...but kudos
Nice post, I like it.
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